serenity

this poem is for any one who is asking for ease and serenity as of my self

I beseech serenity to seize my soul

For it i shall make my heart the most noble abode

I sought to grasp the sunken lull

For it to ease the abundant load

I shall embellish my heart with orchid flowers 

For it i shall envelope my heart with golden hedges

I crave for the lucid powers

For it i roll the carpet of silver edges

I'm awakening my soul from the lurking sedation

For it i pledge to fight the dour beast

I shall scat through the tunnel of salvation 

For it i wait for the beaming rays at the east

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"I shall embellish my heart with orchid flowers
For it i shall envelope my heart with golden hedges"
Many kinds of salvation. I like the journey you took me in your words. I like the above lines. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[gombeggar]

very nicely done...well structured and worded...and a pleasant requesting for the always much needed serenity on top of it all

[PANTHER811]

to beseech serenity is poetic, to use rhyme is fine. The very nature of the write leads to kinetically using words and the grammar they form. I enjoyed. Tom

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[ferousfinite]

Keep writing =)......................

[Latifa]

i will inshallah

[Costa Siwale]

Its like a spell, captivating..i like this

[Ruth]

So lovely! An affirmation of sorts....beautiful x

[Scott Mou]

I felt like the poem didnt flow as well as i'd like. Though, I did like the vocab (big words) you used.

[Latifa]

thanks i'll take your words under consideration

[Danica]

This is beautiful. I'm glad you entered my contest!!!!!!!

[SyberRose]

I enjoyed the feeling of hope and triumph in this piece...Rose:)