tribute

i dedicate this poem to the lovely sun and the mighty moon for making our life so beautiful and i thank god for creating them

hail to the golden queen

looking so fabulously preen

her gleaming rays ever so beautifully seen

stroking the silky pasture so heavenly green

bow to the king

to his majesty rise and sing

with throbbing hearts and vivid zing

rest your eyes upon his lurid ring

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice work, a classical subject for a poem looked at in a new way..

[Latifa]

thank you sir

[chloe slagle]

great :) I like this :) you are so good!!!

[Latifa]

glad you like it

[Sheila Kline]

Words worthy of tribute given to the sun and moon of the universe - yes, our king and queen of the day and night!

[Latifa]

thank you for taking the time and reading

[Marie]

Nice tribute to the heavenly orbs..king and queen...

[Latifa]

thank you for the great preview

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a lovely ode to the sun and the moon. Lydi**

[Latifa]

thanks sweetie glad you liked it

[Jwakefield]

Great work, really good personification of the sun and moon :)

[Latifa]

thanks for the review

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for the moon and the sun. I appreciate them both. They are guides in life if we are wise. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Latifa]

thanks glad you liked it

[Sami Khalil]

A beautiful appreciation of God and his creation in a wonderful , rhyming poem...Bravo

[Latifa]

thank you sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)