A new day

new day new opportunities

AAs the sun drunk the dew 

                                                                           As the birds woke and flew

As the morning breeze so softly blew

                                                                        The motherland had welcomed you

 The sky adorned herself too

 The fable day has arrived in holy faith so gracefully new 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and hopeful poem. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the positive ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lady B]

Beautiful write smooth and easy loved it!

[Latifa]

thank you for the read

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Very well-written. This is a good poetic way to greet me good morning. :)

[Tiffany Boles]

Wonderfully written, much enjoyed.

[Latifa]

thank you for the read hon

[rutherford]

Wonderful opening scene of the day.

[gombeggar]

nice words and wording...not sure if u meant 2 stagger the lines as such...cuz that effectively offsets this whole thing and in mah opinion not so much in a good way...nice last line...lends itself for u 2 write more and finish this up

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

Ciao ! I am highly elated by this poem and it has touched my soul. So darling ! Keep on writing your good poems.

[Mike Emil]

when has the sky become
a female deity???
what pantheon do u worship?
ARRGH!!!

[Joyce S. Greene]

I'm sure the day you belong to the land of your dreams is a glorious day indeed, Latifah! Welcome and congratulations on your wonderful day and on your poem celebrating it.

[TL Boehm]

a lovely poem. Well done Well done