NEVERTHELESS

this poem is about knowing our mission in life and the difficulties that we encounter

distant, very distant i stand

from the enchanting fairy land

with sublime air and golden sand

banned, i feel so banned

to fulfill my solemn errand

with chained and shackled  hands

can , i'm not sure if i can

to relinquish what i've vowed  in the  deity clan

to spread and sweep piety and ruth i plan

like the missionary men

Reviews

[Ronnie]

Interesting phrasing, a good solid read.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Interesting and intriguing. A work out for my brain, thanks. :)

[Latifa]

thank you dear

[Hatchling]

Great piece! I enjoyed reading this

[Latifa]

thank you dear

[rutherford]

reminds me of something vaguely mythological. creates a wonderful impression

[Latifa]

thank you for the read

[annie lee]

Interesting and eloquent: the world does stand in the way of goodness many times, doesn't it?

[FlyingBerryFish]

Amazing x
You cease to amaze me with your skills

[gombeggar]

well done words here...has a few spacing errors is all

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

The letter I always comes capital in any stage of language and rest of the poem is a piece of cake. I enjoyed it all the way.

[Mike Emil]

good good good
like this
like distance
HAI!!!