I survived

patience , persistence , never giving up

Secretive, crying melody is crawling to my veins

A frantic feeling is wrapping around my heart 

Shivered, trembled, lost in wonder

Time packed his hours and flew to the unknown

Baffling air is striding and shrugging his shoulders

Blurring clouds are halting, imprisoning the threads of recognition

Rippling waves are sailing from my shores 

The vacant house is wrecked 

The dusty pages are burned 

The windows of fate are opened

I glanced from the ruins and winked to the wild blue yonder

Reviews

[Ehra Khan]

Beautiful imagery and flow! the words speak for themselves! I loved the way you express the thoughts! keep it up:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the story in the poem.
"The vacant house is wrecked
The dusty pages are burned
The windows of fate are opened
I glanced from the ruins and winked to the wild blue yonder"
The above lines were my favorite. I like the wink to the wild blue wonder. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ghost Writer]

beautiful,well written you are an amazing poet

[Latifa]

thank you so much Rosy.

[Ghost Writer]

You are very into your writing, I could tell don't stop gifting the world with your talent.

[Latifa]

thank you darling for your uplifting encouragements.

[Zahra]

Very nicely worded and beautifully expressed. Beautiful my friend!

[Jack...]

This was wonderful Latifa. So filled with hope and such a positive outlook. Nicely penned.

[Latifa]

thank you Jack for your uplifting review.

[TL Boehm]

that last line....I just loved it. winked into the wild blue yonder! Yes.

[gombeggar]

very good wording here...paints a picture after a fashion...or waves of pictures of feeling

[Mike Emil]

first bugs now seashores
you are everywhere
make a film of this
like the opening of
dark shadows
the tv show
not the damn film
HAI!!!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Impressive and excellent personifications! It's been ages since I last read a poem with personifications as good as this. :)

[Latifa]

thank you so much for your lovely comment

[ron]

Love the metaphoric imagery in this one. The feeling of losing someone is felt.