disguised chances

looking for a chance in the unfamilliar places

Rest my body upon the frost

The flaky souvenirs have departed

Hither, thither

Lingering thought

Awaiting the horizon's gate to inaugurate

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

flaky souvenirs have departed. that's a wonderful line.

[Mike Emil]

this would swing well
at kohlrabi theater
HAI!!!

[MsJewel]

There is beauty in this thought provoking piece. I enjoyed it very much

:) Julie

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Lovely scenery and insights compelling readers to pause and reflect. :)

[rutherford]

Electrifying image in the first line. Takes the reader to a mystical surreal end.

[BlahBlahBlah]

It's so dreamy and feels as if something big is going to happen. Pretty amazing stuff :)

[Latifa]

thank you for the read

[Ruth]

Oh, what a beautiful way to reconnect...

This is sublime...such delicate approach

xx

[Latifa]

thanks hon

[Neon]

Lovely rhyming poem. I liked the flow.

[ron]

Lovely poem. What are you awaiting to be inaugurate.

[Baby Ricochet]

Interesting though the word inaugurate had me thinking about Barrack Obama at the end. Not sure if that's the image you wanted