tyrannized ghosts

oppression, chained voices that want to speak but not allowed to......

Anarchy hurled in the anchored roots

Cracking the pavement of sagacity

 The broken porcelain vases got tossed around

 And the pens of reciting had dried up

Leaving priceless words behind the manacle rods

Roaring with pitched voices

 that reached everyplace 

and no place had opened his ears to hearken

Sad veins clogged its passages

 and mourn the seconds of breathing

Remorse had built the fateful spear

 and torn the membranes of desire

Reviews

[Jeannette Lunete]

Quiet alluring. I'm deeply thrilled. Everything about it is just captivating. Bravissima! :)

[Mirra]

Dark, deep and beautifully express!

[Latifa]

thank you Ink

[Mirra]

You're welcome :-)

[Alfred Kukitz]

Excellent use of metaphor, strong, bold, reaching for depth and finding it.

[Shaquana Adams]

Sad veins clogged its passages
and mourn the seconds of breathing
Remorse had built the fateful spear
and torn the membranes of desire

I love the way this was expressed. It's so wonderfully dark and deep. Brava!
-QuanaWana

[John Anderson]

This is a beautifully expressed poem with depth. Nice work.

[Parimal Pratyush]

It's very easy for us, the fortunate ones, to be able to speak and express our inner feelings to somebody or at someplace but there are people who have no such companions or means to express. They die inside, choked by the burden of thoughts. Very very strong piece. I felt absolutely shook after reading this. I love you for this :)

[Latifa]

wow, really thank you for such a exceptionnel review , I'm glad you liked it

[Avinash]

You are a free soul Latifa. Your words are those of a warrior.

[TL Boehm]

mourn the seconds of breathing. Such a strongly written piece.

[gombeggar]

yer typing is a little indented at the wrong lines...or it's way 2 early fer me 2 be reviewing poems...the words however are stunningly good...would like 2 see more

[Neville]

I must agree with all my reviewing predecessors to date Latifa, this is a well framed and equally well expressed and otherwise powerful poem.

All Good Things & Hey, just for the record 'your English is just great.... Neville