Commandments

trust,believe and be patient

thou shalt not stride upon the pebbles timidly

thou shalt embed  the iron feet and crack the pebbles

thou shalt not fear the power of the wonder

thou shalt wonder and yield to ponder

thou shalt not hook your neck to the noose of dubiety

thou shalt touch the celestial roofs of faith

thou shalt not question the wisdom of divinity

thou shalt hand your liberty to the caring providence

thou shalt not surrender to the urging velleity

thou shalt crave to the untouchable blessing of serenity

Reviews

[gombeggar]

very hip...possibly blasphemous 2...but I like it nonetheless

[Neon]

Your now really reaching out, am really thrilled to read your new stuffs, your new writes are really very passionable reading. Your writes're filled with deep thoughts and with some dominant words.
Keep writing!
Your going very good in this writing field!

[Joyce S. Greene]

I see the wisdom in your "new" commandments, other than perhaps in seven and eight which seem to divest the individual of his free will, which God has not done. You are wise beyond your years, Latifa. Great job!

[Mike Emil]

good
mike emil approves
HAI!!!

[Angel]

Trust, believe, and be patient.

[Latifa]

thank you hon

[Pryde Foltz]

thou shalt crave to the untouchable blessing of serenity

Some good advice. Loved the inclusiveness of this last line. Beautiful.

[Latifa]

thank you dear

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful words and prayers. Good to know ways of others. Allow us to understand the world with a better vision. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Latifa]

thank you for the read friend

[Sami Khalil]

God uses those wonderful edicts for ethics and law which governs individuals and societies in the Bible or the Koran. The first 5 commandments in the Torah deal with our relationship with God and the other 5 deal with our relationships with each other. I hope you are not competing with God here ( lol just kidding ) but you are complimenting those great ones...A splendid work...:)...

[Latifa]

my purpose by those commandments is to emphasis what god has told us wich is to ask and to reach him with conviction and not to be oblivious creatures

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Wonderfully said...You are welcome...:).................

[Latifa]

thank you friend

[Sami Khalil]

:).............

[Leslie Philibert]

Your use of the formal second person plural gives this a a biblical character, this a revised ten commandments, fine idea, like this.

[Latifa]

it was kind of coincidence that I wrote 10 lines and they have the same aspect like the bible