Mayhem

confusion can be really hard and misguading

heavy havoc hungers the poor spirit for insight

hazy horror holds the crier from the light

 

twirling  tempest tears the balance of one's self

turning tables twist the doors of desire

 

flustered feelings feed the peevish beasts

failing faith forbid the crier to belief

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

Damn, sick write!! Love it.

[Latifa]

thank you for the read

[redzone]

Flustered feelings", Twirling tempests, and heavy havoc, oh yes big time mayhem... confusion reigns on the plains!!! fear not Latifa, there are answers (usually) to what we experience... enjoyed the word play... cool poem. ~~redzone

[Latifa]

thank you for the read redzone

[Dr. Wood ?]

great play with words and alliteration I used to do this sort of thing and I loved it then...and I love it now

[Latifa]

thank you for the read dr.wood