Nestle

finding,knowing,aiming

aimless it is

aimless it was

the lost self wants a shelter

hollow hours

empty eyes

in search of sighing breath

in search of knowing

soliloquy is aching

fragile heart is waning

 spring of youth is withering

nestle beneath

 the throne of the proper lord

maybe the warmth of the light will filter

 through the perishing walls

Reviews

[Angel]

Each of us must search for our place to nestle...
I have found my place beneath the Throne of God.
There is plenty of Light...and lots of room, here...
And the walls are quite strong, and very beautiful.

[Mike Emil]

worthy of
kohlrabi theater
HAI!!!

[Tam Warink]

The allegorical is often illusive for a reader. Here there is no mental Mississippi to float down at a leisurely pace, where one may take comfort in the fact that firmament bounds the flow of thoughts. As with the terminus at the mouth of a gulf.. a life too can meander in its search for places to nestle, to find that warmth of light that seems so often to provide an attractive contrast to an otherwise dark and turbulent flow. There is the subtle inorganic mixed in with the predominately organic tone that seems to provide a necessary contrast in this otherwise subtle and soft-walking caricature.

100 padded paws

[Coyote Poetry]

"nestle beneath
the throne of the proper lord
maybe the warmth of the light will filter
through the perishing walls"
I like the above words. Sometime we need to dig deep and find the light. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Latifa]

thank you for taking the time and reading it
happy new year

[Sami Khalil]

hollow hours

empty eyes

in search of sighing breath

in search of knowing

[wordman]

you painted a vivid picture here kinda sad though

[Ruth]

When all else fails, faith can lift us, reconnecting to the universal source of love and light can heal us...eventually...beautiful work. Happy New Year hon :) x

[Latifa]

thanks hon and happy new year to you too

[Pryde Foltz]

soliloquy is aching
fragile heart is waning
spring of youth is withering

Wow … pretty great.

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the subtle line alignment towards the end, good idea