Reminiscence

yearning for the last passed life... things change so fast.

Yore, sweet tasteful yore

Has come knocking on my door

Alas.. I didn't open

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this too, but not too sure if a rhyme scheme belongs in a senryu..

[Latifa]

yeah it's not actually cause it's not meant to be one
thanks for the review

[Baby Ricochet]

Good Senryu........................

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words. You said a lot in so few words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[wordman]

but why not,great job short and sweet

[Praveeta]

Lovely write. Thanks for sharing.

[Tam Warink]

Isa wakin, hat in hand, feel'n so low-down, "Dat dor won open fo no man."

[Mark]

An interesting poem. I really liked it! The second line should be 'Has come knocking on my door' though I think... at least I think you are talking about yore still in this line yes?

[R. L. Hill]

This is interesting...Like it.

[Sami Khalil]

"Yore, sweet tasteful yore

Have came( has come) knocking in(at) my door

Alas.. I didn't open"

I take it as your old beloved friend came knocking but for some reason you did not want to let him in...A splendid poem...:).........