pendulum of my life

tik tok the time is ticking seize your chances...........

Passed and deceased days

All have perished

Silently or with clamor

Testing the mighty heart to survive

Pulling through the new days

Reestablishing my existence

Entering a new phase and

Slowly adapting

Each rock on the way

Need to be removed

To fulfill my mission

Fantasy I will embark into

United or alone

Twirling into possibilities

Uplifting my hopes

Reintegrate peace within me 

Eternally flowing in my veins

Reviews

[Mirra]

I like the uniqueness of this poem. Each line is striking. Clever!

[Latifa]

thank you for the wonderful review :)

[Mirra]

Your welcome :-)

[C. Rose]

Silently of with Clamor" - got to me. Nice line.

Well done. I like that this in one poem, not three.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Alfred Kukitz]

Latifa you are the poet's dream. I wonder around your mind and I find the essence of soul carrying me to my home.

[Latifa]

wow, thank you sincerly for your uplifting review, you have made me so happy Sir

[Parimal Pratyush]

PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE - the three points in the way of the pendulum of life. Amazing work. How did you think of it?

[Avinash]

I see the brave attempts to claim the freedom of soul in this poem. The war every human has to fight inside themselves is the toughest one.

[rutherford]

Finely crafted. Each stanza conveys a true feel for the tense.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Blue]

One of the most effective poems in acrostic I've read on this site. Well done!

[wordman]

I liked the last stanza best great job

[Saddam]

beautifully done that. Love the way as you express it. Fantastic, dear. You write it very well.