Shifted

some moments in your life are priceless specially the spiritual ones

the starry sky whispers in my ear

 mystical  thoughts of revelation

and I shift my mortal body

 into a ravishing Eden 

in a clasping   moment 

I am surrounded by graceful silhouettes 

of evangelical dancers

hypnotized .........

my being is melted into the light 

and my thirsty soul unites with the immortal

 

Reviews

[Jon Roggie]

Beautiful write. An instant to be achieved.

[Alfred Kukitz]

You are about the heaviest young writer I have ever met. Dazzling in conception, mirrored in an adventurous soul!

[Tinkerbellje]

What a beautifully magical poem. Well done!

[Latifa]

thank you dear.

[Tinkerbellje]

You're welcome :-)

[rutherford]

great spiritual reach to this poem. a light touch and a strong Sufi feeling. Excellent.

[Latifa]

thank you fir your lovely review.

[A. Amos]

This one is beautifully crafted....

[Latifa]

thank you once again.

[A. Amos]

You're welcome

[Blue]

You gave a feeling that I am in heaven. Your words and your delivery have a dreamlike quality. Please write more of these.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this too ; might be worth using a ; instead of .....

[Latifa]

thank you for the review my friend

[wordman]

lot of images in this write souls unite with the immortals was my fav

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[MsJewel]

The images you have created are breathtaking. Stunning, stunning poetry!

:) Julie

[Latifa]

thank you dear friend