Deny

deny is wrongful deceptive feeling that leads you to illusion

Hazy eyes blinded 

By deceptive flickering lies

Guiding them to a maze

Of suffering times

To clarify is to stop denial 
To listen with the flair of disbelief

Can lead you to the pit

Of lonely retreats

Reviews

[ron]

Yes it can. Nice poem....

[Megan]

This is great! I love the wordplay! :)

[Angel]

Ouch. This one hit me right in my gut...

(no smart remarks about the size of the target, please)

I felt the emotion in this.
Very well done, my friend...

[Anand Sehgal]

honest, emotive write. I liked the way you presented your words :)

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[A. Amos]

You have a deep and beautiful message in your poetry, i truly enjoyed and will come back to read more of you. Thank you for sharing

[Latifa]

thank you for the review, I appreciate it.