New soul

reborn, new age.

I'm a new soul

Drenched in possibilities

Pensive, silent

I sit on the ashes of the defeated beasts

I walk upon the pavements of sullen streets

Shrugging my shoulders and dusting my sleeves

I put my feet into 

The purging seas

And I let the waves heal my weary veins

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

You know you can get a new soul

[Nicholas Hagenschneider]

I enjoyed this. I imagined this rebirth as more of a new found power of some kind.

[Latifa]

thank you for stoping by.

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sounds to me like phoenix story. something was re born. very strong poem for me. at few words you describe very important thing at human life. thanks

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Martin

[Blue]

You have wisely chosen the appropriate words to portray this powerful imagery. I felt encouraged and alive, thanks to you.

"I'm a new soul
Drenched in possibilities"

Yeah, we are all drenched in possibilities!

[Latifa]

thank you for the splendid review

[Ruth]

Rebirth never sounded so lovely, beautiful! x

[Latifa]

thank you dear

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and beautiful poem. I like the description of the journey to the sea to calm the weary body. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[stars are far]

that was so great...i loved your last line ..
"And I let the waves heal my weary veins" ...its a very deep imagery .. it says more than words.. because waves heal the soul in a the STORMY way..which is the hard way.. and when you ask the waves to heal your veins.. i think you want to suffer inorder to reach peace...
well thats kind of deeper than you meant MAYBE..but i understanbd poetry in my view..and please if you find too far from what you meant just tell me,.or if i exagerate what you meant ..just say ...

keep sharing:)

[TL Boehm]

Amen. We need that refreshing after the fight. I found this poem so relatable.

[Mark]

I like the atmosphere of this. It is like a teenager's angst.