floating aimlessly

needing urge to feel alive once again and embrace it's beauty

Floating aimlessly.....

I need a sign

Like the walking dead

I'm hypnotized to fulfill the daily charts

Perplexing and shackling!

 Confusion has closed my third eye

 And the flask of reasons has dried up

With no drops of elixir peace

My soul is thirsty

 So I’m loading for the kairos

And begging to hear a saving susurrus

 

Author's Note

kairos means the perfect moment when everything falls into place.
susurrus is a low soft sound, sort of whispering.

Reviews

[Saddam]

Exact poem by heart dear..
Anyone search a aim to be free from wander.
Capable write to say as you want.

[Latifa]

thank you for the read dear.

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine poem, especially the working in of local words ; excellent ; this is the right direction for your work

[Latifa]

thank you for the review friend...

[wordman]

you know I think we all search for this magic moment

[A. Amos]

A graceful and eloquent write, bravo!

[Sami Khalil]

We step into time floating aimlessly trying to find an identity, a country , a true love , a secure future and so forth. Choices haunt us every waking moment for it will affect on all these things. Some wait for the perfect timing of things( Kairos) where all will fall into place. Some just take the leap of faith and jump head on...A powerful write...:)............

[Latifa]

thank you Sami for the review and the read.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)...................

[Jack...]

One step at a time my friend. Sometimes life gets a bit to hectic, but soothing whispers will be heard and felt in time. Very nicely penned. I feel this was all too often.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review and the read.

[Jack...]

You are very welcome. Thank you for the new words.