LOVE eulogies

thet heart is not to be controlled

Embrace the night's dances,

Tapping with the melodies of nostalgia,

Tuning with rhythmical chime of love eulogies.

Whistles in the air;

Whispers in the dusky lairs

Twirling with silvery shadows of rebellious feelings.

 The heart is drenched

In sour rivers of whimsical  ballads,

Arbitrary,frivolous

Yet ecstatic.

Where is the ceiling

That kept my reasonings?

It seem that the house of logic

Is built with fainting cards,

So I'll embrace the night's dances

And tune with the rhythmical  chimes of love eulogies.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Especially yours! Don't you ever get a transplant the poetry simply will
not do.

[John Anderson]

Very nicely done and a poem I can certainly relate to. Enjoyed it much.

[rutherford]

Connected to this on a personal level. My sense was of the night's influence on our feelings of lost love and nostalgia. I especially like the lines "Arbitrary,frivolous/Yet ecstatic"

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[Ruth]

This is lovely...the heart is a powerful instrument of channeling...better than the mind :) x

[Latifa]

thank you Poppy

[DrD]

You craft your works very well, using metaphor to its exact proporltions. The "sour river" is a prime example that makes works like this memorable. An extremely well done poem that I enjoyed reading immensely.

[Latifa]

thank you dear David, it's nice to hear from you again.

[Baby Ricochet]

The ceiling is usually up from the floor

[Jamil Isimbabi]

lovely poem, Simple yet filled with a lot of meaning. love the way you use metaphors
''Where is the ceiling
That kept my reasonings?
It seem that the house of logic
Is built with fainting cards''.
Beautiful.

[Frieda P]

Reminds me of one of my favorite quotes, 'The heart has reasons which reason knows nothing of'...love those last two lines, great read Latifa.

[Saddam]

Simply beautiful write. Love your art dear.

[stars are far]

That was well done.keep it up