plastic eyes

read between the lines.

tasteless yet euphoric

colorless yet vivid

waters are as simple yet euphoric

open your insight

and don't wear plastic eyes

that miss the shadows

and judge the broken vessels

lean forward and break the plastic eyes

to embrace the third one

and plunge into silent hymn of peace

Reviews

[Mark]

Very nice. If only we could all see with 'the third one'!

[Jamil Isimbabi]

the first lines got me hooked, brought an intense feel to the poem. Well written

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[Saddam]

open your insight
and don't wear plastic eyes
that miss the shadows
and judge the broken vessels.

Don't blow away with sercumstences and open your insight. And think beyond the line.

[melissa]

Great poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[Latifa]

thank you for the review dear.

[melissa]

You're welcome

[wordman]

now I can see colors so vivid they blind me took off those plastic eyes
now I don`t have a disguise wow this comment is a total rant lol

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the way you evoke tension through opposites in the first lines !

[Pryde Foltz]

A wonderful spiritual write, Latifa.

[MsJewel]

You have shared some beautifully wise words!

:) Julie

[redzone]

No blinders.. if we really look and look at the world as it actually is we may actually see a path that allows us to lose plastic eyes and the broken vessels and fix this world of pain. Much to "see" in your poem Latifa. ~~redzone