Hedonistic flowers

after such a long time, I hope you like it guys.

Hedonistic flowers wrap its intoxicating odor

 It twirls, it coils

 It loops around your aorta

 To stroke, to paralyze your logic

 Aloof, detached your eyes stand blurred

 And your brain is intoxicated

 With the hedonistic odor

 WAKEY,WAKEY

     Drunken heart

I see you have addicted to the sweetness of the flowers

 The malicious sour thorns poked

 The drunken heart to awaken it

  Malicious you said..

  Why did it wake me then?

 As simple and as powerful 

 The thorns got envious of the hedonistic flowers

 And decides to poke the drunken heart

Reviews

[Fire Mage Andrea]

good choice of phrases - this is great
''the thorns got envious'' - this is a great line

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Chris Atkinson]

beautiful poem and realy well writen Latifa, you described it perfectly. Fantastic piece.

[Latifa]

thank you so much for the review.

[MsJewel]

Wonderful use of metaphor and imagery in this well written poem.
Very nice!
:) Julie

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Avinash]

What a beautiful poem. It is always people who are incapable to dream often try to wake others from it.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[John Anderson]

This is very poetic, creative and imaginative!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review