Not any cup of tea

I hope you like it

jarring noises of the fools

divert my eyes toward the skies

 oh please, hand me the climbing ladders

I want to sip a cup of tea

with the stars

where silence is the violinist

and the flashing lights

are the graceful dancers

no past, no future, no present

break the clayey shackles

 and listen to the hypnotic violinist

 

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Good imagery here. Good one

[MsJewel]

Such beautiful imagery in this gorgeous poem..
sipping tea with the stars...simply lovely!

:) Julie

[Latifa]

thank you hon for the review

[MsJewel]

Always a pleasure

[R. L. Hill]

This is lovely. I agree completely with you when it comes to this desire of solitude and peace. Sipping tea with the stars and silence being the master violinist....Very beautiful imagery.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Brittany Zedalis]

Such beautiful imagery. How I'd love to sip a cup of tea with the stars.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Frieda P]

What an enchanting notion, and I love a poem with violins, especially if they're hypnotic...

[Latifa]

thank you Frieda for the reivew ..:).............

[Frieda P]

My pleasure Latifa, muchly enjoyed! :)

[Latifa]

I love your profile pic by the way

[Frieda P]

Oh thanks, I was having an identity crisis, who better to be than Marilyn?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

last two lines are killers...but yes that hypnotic violinist better than listening to all the fools in life...

your analogy makes me think of a mother, pouring her cup of tea and the retreating upstairs to her bedroom to get some peace from the chaos of the house, wish her children might be silent, graceful dancers.

very cool.

[Latifa]

thank you for the kind review Jacob.

[Shaquana Adams]

break the clayey shackles
and listen to the hypnotic violinist

Nicely worded. I enjoyed this Latifa. Thanks for sharing :)
-QuanaWana

[Latifa]

thank you for the review hon..:)...............

[Alfred Kukitz]

I do like it! Sipping a cup of tea with the stars possess an originality you can't find just anywhere. Moreover, the line catapults the reader into this fanciful tale.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Coyote Poetry]

Would be to have a cup of tea with the stars. Good use of words leading the reader to good places and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Latifa]

thank you.......

[John Anderson]

This is so beautifully expressed and finely written. I love it's depth and wonderful flow as well.

[Latifa]

thank you John....