I must break the habits. monologue

I just can't carry on likethis anymore......................I need a breack through

am I oblivious ?

or they're just abstract 

am I chained to be oblivious ?

or they're just abstract

........sigh!

but I feel them

I feel them wrapping around my senses

around my right brain

........ sigh!........ again thinking....

are they strand or stones?

sometimes I feel chained

sometime I feel buried

my proactive sense are jammed

...........enough .

I can't blink without thinking

am I oblivious or they're just abstract

are they really here or it's just

a bland excuse to be normal

and reject singularity

Reviews

[Frieda P]

A frenetic read, the panic in your words is palpable. Sometimes you just have to wonder, and accept the abstract and oblivious where it stands. Excellent Latifa.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review dear

[Ruth]

This is a vast poem, in the respect that it could signify many, many things, clever hon :) x

[An owl on the moon]

A powerful stream of thoughts and feelings... grasping for something more.. for understanding...

[Saddam]

sometimes I feel chained
sometime I feel buried
my proactive sense are jammed
...........enough .
I can't blink without thinking.

.........sigh........ The poem which make me think!

[Leslie Philibert]

a poem that for me impresses with ambuguity, and is so universal..

[Alfred Kukitz]

I know the feeling Latifa........keep plugging!

[John Anderson]

this is such a beautifully written piece so full of heart

[Parimal Pratyush]

Our mind throws open so many possibilities, sometimes so many at once that we are utterly confused as to decide anything. A very brilliant work. :D

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[wordman]

my brain working over time now I`m confused was it really lol loved it

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Avinash]

Brave and Beautiful words.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Avinash