nightly nights

it's been a long while since i've writen anything, so this one is after a long period of writers block.

Nightly,nightly nights
come neighing,
they sense my urge for shades
to cool off the itching flames.

nightly, nightly nights
throw their blinking cape
at my crouching spine of worry,
I lay under to pant,
I lay under to solace,
then I fondle with the stars
to shed the aweless
torment and renew the promise
to abolish all that is malice.

Reviews

[Mike Defreitas]

That was a very beuatiful poem, latifa. Love the movement in imagery, the line 'fondle with the stars'' was especially evocative.

[Salem]

excellent read, keep it up ...........

[Latifa]

thank you for the review