......................dots

some scrabble that poped in my mind, ( again fighting the blocks :)

dots shall soon become lines ______________ space                

 then void


                             

        will it become void?

 I pray to God it won't.............I only pray

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

To pray shows great strength my friend... even if everything is taken from us we can always pray :) Awesome work :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Enjoyable read. I really thought the theme was great.
The mysterious line in the end was my favorite part.

[Sami Khalil]

A very sincere poem on the mental blocks and how they torment the narrator. I say let things come natural and in due time for any forcing will have unnatural effects. Best of luck...Excellent...:).....

[B]

A very playful write

Cool

[An owl on the moon]

Your words seem to dance and play over the mind, Latifa, all revolving around the void, and the wondering of being voided. You made me ponder how the world is made up of infinite dots of color and light... and all the silences in between.

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem dear friend. Left reader with thoughts and possibilities. When I can't write. I use Leonard Cohen, P.J Harvey and Lana Del Rey. Always give me reasons to write. I hope you are doing well my friend.
Coyote