Internal chaos

violating the principles of justice take it's toll on us slowly and cunnigly until our spirits become eroded with our own regrets specially those whom their mission in life is to serve justice.

clatter, clatter , clatter

he who reigns with frozen devotions, only hears clatter,

alone, he stands to face the judgments of the internal chatter, 

oral arguments  hush, fall apart and scatter

silencing the sly hails  of the flatterer.

 

Reviews

[Urja Gokani]

amazingly written keep it up !!

[Beautiful Christmas Tre..]

beautifully writtennnnnn....i luv it

[Latifa]

thank you for the review :)

[Art Sun]

justice evades even those who seek it...nice work on this poem...

[Simon Welsh]

Those voices never silence sometimes.

[Sai]

I really like how you used the word chaos and created a poem from it. It's extremely creative and witty. I can feel the world crushing around me as I read this. Amazing work!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. Even left a message and some wisdom. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mutasem Amayreh]

very nice piece, you did a great job here

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Noise drowning out the magnificent beauty of this world.
What a lesson.

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
Keep it up!!

[Kajal Sharma]

that is really amazing!! good job