white noise

please share with me your own white noise :)

White noise

Do not follow the clock.

It rebels  against  the hourly chimes of order.

It stays stagnant,

To kill you deafly.

It is not silence.

But white noise.

Only

 white noise.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Silence can kill us. In life. Noise become necessary. White noise can lead to shadows and dark places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Latifa]

my own white noise are those repetitive thoughts of fear, hesitation and negativity.
It kills my own hours cause they kidnap my presence to make me swirl within their white noise.

share with me your own white noise.

[Eternal Devotion]

Your use of language works well, a small critic is try and make the meaning behind your poem a little more obvious to the reader as I'm a frequent reader of poetry and although i did like this peace i struggled to understand what it was you were trying to say.

[Latifa]

thank you for your critic, I will share my own purpose from this peace :)