gargling parallelly

happy new year everyone :)

I taste freedom with  a spoon of questions.

I gargle it

 to contemplate.

I make no thinking pose.

 I Veneer my visage with conformity,

 Gargling Parallelly.

At times....

I break the spoon

and gulp the gelatinous mirage of zombies around me

Sighing:

"I am one of them "

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

It almost felt like shifting back and forth between two worlds. Very imaginative writing. It inspires a lot of thought.

[C. Rose]

The title caught my attention. My favorite line is "gulp the gelatinous mirage of zombies". I like usage of gargle as to mull over.

[An owl on the moon]

Your words provoke such vivid colors, such movement of thought, and a world of mist that haunts and hungers. You speak a novel in just 11 lines, dear Latifa.

[Latifa]

ooh what encouraging review, omg I really appreciate your reviews craig .

[An owl on the moon]

And I always appreciate your poetry, Latifa. :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hell no! With my foot pounding on the entire Earth's surface. I love you, always will, your writing eclipses zombie apocalypse.

Love,
Al

[Latifa]

ooh thank you for your encouraging review Alfred , I appreciate it, it mad me smile :) :) :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did like the flow of thoughts with the perfect ending. It is scary when we learn. We have became the same. Thank you Latifa for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[zaisham9393]

This is interesting !! Happy New year!
Thank you for sharing :)!

[Emily]

I like the meaning!
Keep it up!!

[wordman]

wow,this is a dark write ! loved it