half written story

half written story

A Poem by briana
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About a boy who I loved but drifted from

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We were an incomplete story,
Half written and thrown away
Cut off before we could come to an end
A brutal conclusion to a beautiful story

© 2015 briana


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I like the way you have under written this. It leaves so much in the head of the reader.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its simple but holds power behind the words you chose(:

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 23, 2015
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briana
briana

adelaide , Australia



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I'm 20, I've been writing for around 5 years and I just needed somewhere where I could post them without family and friends seeing them and hopefully I can get some feedback because most of my writing.. more..