UNTITLED

If it's not a heart, what is beating within me?

where do feelings come from?

why do i have so much pain?

Why am i not accepted?

Why does everyone like me?

Why dont you accept me ?

Why do i let you get under my skin?

I didn't even jump out

Why do you judge me?

Reviews

[wordplay29]

Short and too the point...don't worry about what others think of u, they will only suck the light from u until your glow Burns out ...

[Poetic Beauty]

There are many questions here and some of them are questions that can't be answered. People judge others harshly and cruelly many times and it isn't fair. Sometimes people judge because they are jealous. I have learned it doesn't matter what people think of me. Be who you are or you will never be happy. Everyone struggles with thinking they won't measure up but I am fortunate because I have great friends and a very supportive family except one sister.

[roarke]

lots of questions.
lots of thought.
lots of curiosity.
lots of feeling.

sounds like a good place to get started.

[Eagle Cruagh]

I`m sure that many of us ask the
questions that you pose, but they
are, as a whole, unanswerable, like
"who am I"
You have left a great little peem
I love it.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[UnOrThOdOx]

Beautiful. Simplicity is a good thing. Sometimes less is more, and this was definitely one of those situations. I also liked how it was short. I don't particularly like long poems. This was short and straight to the point. Well done. (=

[raymondb]

I realy enjoyed reading your pome, Untitled is one of the best pomes i ever read.