I Like You

There is a moment,

where I can feel again,

a single second,

where my heart beats

to no end,

It is when I saw you,

for the very first time

And when I spoke to you,

on the very first night,

my heart was soon brought

back to life…

I know we’ve just met

But you can bet,

that from the start

I could already tell

that you are very,

very special...

And so... I write this...

this poem for you,

since you asked me to

I hope you like it,

just as much as I like you...

Reviews

[The Black Warrior]

This is the most romantic thing that somebody could do! I loved it especial how descriptive and simple.
This is my favorite lines:

It is when I saw you,
for the very first time
And when I spoke to you,
on the very first night

Beautifully done...I enjoy it :D

[Cool Girl]

Aww, someone asked you to write them a poem? That is so sweet! This is really nice and passionate. Who ever you wrote it for is super lucky:) Great job!

[ANTO]

Fine dedication Brian - thems a keeper as we say
Simple, honest - like the working man of the poetry world
thanks for the RR

[Cambion]

It's lucky people who have friends that write such excellent and compassionate poetry.