Your Effect

Your Effect

A Poem by Joe

You leave me gasping for air
Reaching for you when you're not even there
I feel so breathless
I just can't walk another step
I need to find you
I need to remind you...that I care

© 2010 Joe


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i love the feeling of desperation in this. perhaps u could expand on it a bit?

Posted 15 Years Ago

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 Added on January 30, 2010
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I absolutely love writing and have been writing for a few years now. I'm only 16, so most of my poetry is about the happenings of my teenage years. I write about hopeful romances and occasional heartb.. more..