Betwixt the Innermost and I

A deep contemplation of the innermost being, residing within one's self and the Home one seeks to find within.

Betwixt the Innermost and I

Resides the deepest of soul satisfaction
Coupled with an even deeper soul's transaction
Of health and Home
And the things lesser known
Though they be the foundation which hone
The mortal flesh to my enclosure

And the chalice of memories
Remissions of the greatest Being ever known

Betwixt the Innermost and I
I find my soul as. . .
Forever foretold
For I am a composer
Composing and disposing
Life as I've known it to be

My Home


Daniel J. Walker

Reviews

[Sunny]

Wow I've never read anything like this. nicely done, the rhyming scheme is just right for this.:)

[Daniel J. Walker]

Why thank you, miss Sunny. Glad you enjoyed it :) That's exactly it, I seem to end it at just the opportune time to allow the rhyme scheme to flow. Which, mind you, I don't even know how to make rhyming schemes, or if I do, I have no idea how I did it haha.

[Sunny]

Haha I'm not much of a "rhymer" myself.

[Daniel J. Walker]

I'm more free form, myself.

[Sunny]

That's usually more fun when it comes to writing. just being who you are.

[Daniel J. Walker]

Exactly, allowing free flow.