Echoes

If I could go back in time, I'd change everything:

Every touch, every kiss, every word spoken.

It tears at my heart, the way that things turned out.

You're gone now, but I still feel you every day.

I pretend that these words aren't just in my head,

but that somehow they've reached into your thoughts.

I can still feel you.

Even in your absence I can feel your hatred towards me.

It seeps through your every orifice,

filling my head and screaming for release,

but I can't let it go...

Reviews

[alanwgraham]

These are very anguished words. There is no stronger emotion than love when it is broken. I guess many will identify with your poem.
Regards,
Alan

[jamykinns]

Powerful. I think we've all felt like this at some point in our lives. You can definitely write. Definitely.

[Daniel DeLorez]

Thank you. This one's pretty old, don't even remember writing it.

[Carolynn]

Your writing is very powerful - it feels like it comes from your soul, very emotional and very good!

[Daniel DeLorez]

Thank you again. I'm glad you enjoyed it.