the mark

the mark

A Poem by brigid

the mark….25.3.2013

you said you
would put
your mark
of ownership
     on  me. 

i winced
at the
ownership
    bit.

you said,
give me your neck.

i gave it freely
not realising,
my vampire,
your mark
of ownership
would be 
     on my 
virgin neck
for all to see,
and my breast,
which you marked
while i was still gasping
from the first
delicious marking.

ah,
you are soooo
naughty,
my vampire prince.

and now 
i am
marked
for all eternity
as yours.

© 2013 brigid


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Hello.. again! Guess you get full marks for this poem, brigid!

Posted 2 Years Ago


this was great :) I am not too much into vampires but i really got a kick out of it! Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


brigid

12 Years Ago

thanks for your fab review jenkkey83. i am not into vampires at all! it was just a strange neck kiss.. read more

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brigid
brigid

sunshine coast, queensland, Australia



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hello, i cant believe it's been 7 long years since i was last here ...where has the time gone? not much poetry written in this gap but hopefully inspiration will strike again. best wishes to all my .. more..