a dangerous person

this was a subject given by my local writers group

a most dangerous person…writers group..20.9.2011

 

　

i think that i

could be a most dangerous person,

if provoked

                correctly.

 

if cajoled with

peacefully relaxing in my hammock reading,

                           forever,

i would bore a friend to death

with my bombastic rhetoric.

 

if sweet talked with

luscious smooth belgian chocolate

             forever,

i would smother a lover

with my glistening brown body.

 

if enticed with

endless seas and swimming silently

              forever,

i would kill a man

with my dorsal fin.

 

we may all find our

provocations

to be different,

but skulking in the shadow self,

lies a wolf

in sheep’s clothing,

                        with glistening fangs,

                waiting….to kill.

Author's Note

hope you enjoy. this certainly brought out a darker side of my self...

Reviews

[Ed Hart]

you could easily make my ten-most-wanted list

[Revery]

This is very fun, it brings mixed emotions and feelings as I read it, from intimidation to ease and back again, lol. The reader can't quite tell if its a threat or a anecdote. Very unique in the emotions it conjures.

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe if you provoke a woman. Could be in great danger. I like the description in the poem. Made your point with the entertaining poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote