Tell me you love me

A Poem by Briony Bryant

If I turned my skin inside out

Let all my guts spill on your floor

Heart pumping out my chest

Would you still find me pretty?

Could you clean the mess?

© 2013 Briony Bryant

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love & appreciate any comments, thank you for reading!

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Coyote Poetry

Powerful emotion and question. I like the visions and wants of the words. You open the door to vision and the need for more description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago

Horizons

It's just a well defined a creative write which's filled with the questions... i loved how you expressed your ways to let everyone know about the your theme. I love how you just converted the words of poetry into the poem. Creatively penned write. Well, everyone'd love you if you've a nice heart who's filled with Mercy for everyone. That's all i got from the piece. Well done, Nicely penned!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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12 Years Ago

Thank-you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

12 Years Ago

Welcome! Btw, can i ask, is this a real write which's came from your life? mind if i ask?

12 Years Ago

Everything that I write is raw and inspired from very real emotions that I've experienced and felt. .. read more

Glen Yumang Manese

THE TRANSITION OF THIS PIECE...THE BEAUTY OF IT ALL IS ON THE INSIDE...DOES NOT MATTER IF ITS UGLY OR PRETTY...MATTERS ONLY HOW YOU PERCEIVE THE PERSON IN YOUR LIFE...CLEANING THE MESS IS LIKE GROWING OLD WITH SOMEONE...GOING THE DISTANCE...