Jealous

I hope she can still taste me inside of your mouth,

buried deep inside of you,

swimming through every vain,

choking your heart. 

Author's Note

Free verse poem, I wanted to add on to my poem: Selfish. Any comments/ or criticisms would be appreciated. Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Sure, this piece is short, but it definitely says a lot for itself! Jealousy is a very difficult and delicate thing for one to deal with and can often lead one down a dangerous road one day. It is a natural thing to be jealous when we see the ones we love or want with the wrong person...when they know we are right here, next to them.

[Briony Bryant]

Thanks for reading!

[Raven]

I like the impact of the end. You are still a part of him and this is a great way to show it, along with your anger.