heart broken

the darkness of my fears are creeping up
my heart is in never ending pain and the tears will never dry
i feel as though a knife was drawn through my heart and it will never stop bleeding
i will be alone forever and never love again

i can't stand the pain anymore
you took my heart and killed it
my tears won't stop flowing
a storm took over my aching heart

my heart is now mending from the torture i was put through
my tears are now drying
the storm is clearing up now and the sun is begininning to shine
a piece of my heart is still aching, its a scar left behind

someone takes my hand
they lead me to a place i've never been
my heart is completely healed
i guess you can love again
 

Reviews

[brittneymarie]

I really like this poem
i love the emotion running through it in every sentence

[Christopher J. Dawson]

I like this one... I love it when negativity falls to the positive vibration!

[Peteypie]

i enjoyed it cause it really demonstrated like how to get better from a really bad sense of emotion and stuff like that. good sense of feelings. i just feel like there needs to be something holding it together.

[A.Low]

awww.....
the emotion in this hit me hard.
good job.

[Meriel Brianne.]

Wow, I, myself have never even dated someone, and the emotion in your writing hits me like a concrete ball, straight to the face. It's incredible, and I know someone's out there for you.

[** LIVE LOVE **]

Great written expression of your feelings. I like the methaphors you use they really make this piece strong. I have been burned in relationships, but when the heart is open love always will find its way in. Keep Loving! ~ Chris

[CFL]

Very well written Britty. I can feel the emotion in the beginning, the hurt and pain. And I like how you went from pain in the beginning to the healing and moving on in the end. You were able to show that no matter how deep the hurt, one can move on and love again.

Excellent!!!

[D.L. Holmes]

nice. peaceful ending.

[Vansgirlrocks]

love this poem. I can feel that pain that u have.