Nervous

I walk by you, waiting for you to notice
My heart is racing at the speed of lightning

My nerves increase and blood starts rushing in my veins
I turn to look at you and see you staring at me with that perfect smile of yours

My heart is pounding through my chest trying to find a way out
My breathing quickens and my head is filled with many thoughts of you

My hands start trembling with excitement
I feel your eyes gazing into mine

When your pools of caramel looked into my pools of blue I almost melted
I couldn't speak
The words I tryed to recite wouldn't exit my mouth
I was speechless

I was frozen in time, a moment like this won't come again
When your hand touched my face, I knew it was meant to be

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

"My heart is pounding through my chest trying to find a way out
My breathing quickens and my head is filled with many thoughts of you"
I understand that feeling all too well.

This is an excellent write.
I look forward to reading more of your writing soon.

-Elissa

[Kiara]

absolutely relatable for many!:)
I know for sure I have felt like this
you expressed so very well
and Im glad I took notice and had the chance to read this piece
good job! -arabella

[A.Low]

very well written its very cute

ya i defenittly have moments like this

[ATG]

This was a very sweet poem. I liked it. It was very well written.

[Stephanie]

Infatuation. I know it well. I really enjoyed this. All I would suggest is that you keep with the two line stanzas you started with and split up the one that has four. It would still get your point across. Other than that, great job! :)

[Suzy Sunshine]

I love it! It's so cute! If I had a dime for every time I felt like this, I'd be, like, so rich! lol