getting lost

happy poem. here's something new and different from me! ha (:

Arms around me,

No space between,

Breathing in the same air.

Overwhelmed by his smell.

Head spinning,

Lips tingling,

Nothing else matters,

Our own little world,

Getting lost in love.

Author's Note

again, 30 words, for a contest. opinions?

Reviews

[Lauren Burch]

I think the choppiness adds the the effect. Fun! i like it.

[Becca :)]

this is really good. i could at once relate. hahahahaha. good job!! =]

[thomas connelly]

we live as we dream alone
some flirt with fascism
some lie in arms of lovers

good to see you chose the latter

[dawnmarie]

very romantic !!!!!! intense ...

[Shane]

Great poem=)...nice short and sweet