We're Over

i just found this in a drawer. I wrote it about six or seven months ago. Enjoy.

We're over.

We're through,

but you want me,

and I need you.

Mistakes made, so many.

To trust,

or give up on the one thing that held me together?

Can we get it back?

In and out of love

trying to stay sane

this silly game

Is this forgiving or becoming weak?

Reviews

[Jeff Loquist]

I guess I don't see the love that the other review did, but that is what makes poetry so beautiful. Need...obsession, maybe. Whatever anyone sees, this poem encompasses so much emotion. Very nice.

[Pepsimax]

exceptional. just well done katie. Such a well written love poem.