Nightmare or Reality

Head is aching

Pulse is racing

Heart is breaking

Sanity leaving

Vision blurring

Ears are ringing

Time is flying

Tears are pouring

Thoughts confusing

Staggered breathing

Hands are shaking

Blood is dripping

Body’s screaming

Trees are howling

Moon is glaring

Clouds are smiling

Rain is taunting

Thunder rolling

Lightning flashing

Death is waiting.

My terrifying nightmare becomes reality.

Reviews

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

I love this!
It's so sharp and it made my mind spin.
It reminds me of the part in those horror films where the main character escapes the murderer and is running through the trees in a storm and you're not sure if they'll make it out alive.
Amazingly written, I could felt it as I read it.

-Elissa :)

[GunMetal]

Excellent consistency. Because most of the lines are only 4 syllables, it was easy to read and kept a nice rhythm to the flow. Over all, it was very chilling. Great work.

[Poeticpiers]

terse verse seems to be your forte.

[Ali_Avery~7]

nice! I love all of the personification :} and the story it tells just stops my heart and takes my breath away amazing work here!!

-QG

[Hippy]

i like it i felt you worked hard on this one

[Devons]

Excellent. The pace and drive of this poem really carries you breathtakingly along. Smart.

"Time is flying
Tears are pouring"

Really good.

[♥(heatherawesome..]

thats is really sad

[Haifa]

I like the way you wrote this, at all its sad poem. Good job

[DarkLovingRaven]

This is OK but it isn't the best. I really can't feel any relation to it... Well, my personal opinion. Nice try though.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe that is sad. I really enjoyed it though. I can relate. Thanks for sharing. :)