life without love

another poem for the same person

I've got the life I wanted

but I don't have you

so what is it worth?

tell me baby

A life without love

then kill me in your open arms

Replace your kiss with a knife

I`ll put my armor aside

and while I die

beauty is defined, completely new

tell me what I`m aiming for

when I can`t say the prettiest words to you?

Reviews

[willweb]

Truly, what is it worth without the one you want by your side. Sometimes we are charged to find out if it is worth it or not and often we find that perhaps, sometimes it is better. Though the memories and feelings will linger for a long time, it seems at times taking a different path can open avenues we did not know existed. I enjoyed your poem, once more, a poem that can be felt.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I really like the lines in the middle of this...the paradoxes work very well.

[Cassie Potter]

This is beautiful, and I can really connect to it. What is Life worth if you dont have someone to love and be by your side through it all. To help you fight, But theres someone out there for everyone, and if we're lucky. We'll find them