stop waiting

the sun will look different one day

and the birds

will sing

another song,

but this time,

you`ll feel proud 

of the grass and the sky.

stop waiting for life to be kind. 

-lov

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

We can wait our whole lives for certain niceties to come our way… but we must live our lives to the fullest despite negative we may get bogged down by; don’t wait for that one day!
Warmly
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[Vol]

lov,
(My name spelled backwards...) I've read several of your poems, and am impressed with the succinct way you light up the scene. Poetry is about finding something worth seeing in the human condition and spotlighting what we need to understand. Your minimalist images cut like razors, so sharp the background fades to nothing, so your focus is tight on the one thing you need to tell us. No waste, every jot and tittle in use and no leftovers.
Well done, indeed.
Vol

[lov]

hi vol! (I love our name thing haha)
thank you so much for your kind words, this really made my day. I love to see people who are in love with words and poetry like me. you make me feel seen.

[Vol]

Keep writing like this and I won't be the only one...