lust, longing, leaving

lust, longing, leaving.

my tongue burns on salt water.

diving deeper into the ocean.

I need to find out,

how long I have to drown

to reach heaven.

- lov

Reviews

[Michael Sun Bear]

Vol said it well and colorfully. I second his words. A big story emerges from a handful of words. Well done.

[Vol]

Lov,
Clint Eastwood never shot a truer bullet. And this is what I was talking about, you have given gallons of things to think about from a teaspoon of words. The universe as ocean, desire for more, death, life after... it is breaking my arm to not throw down five hundred words right now!
Vol