dandelions

sun soaked dandelions

promising me a new era,

the green and the feeling

of summer

are holding me softly by my hair.

if it`s so easy to speak

why won`t you just give me a kiss?

-lov

Reviews

[Relic]

This echoes of new beginnings to me. Summer is always good for that. It can make us feel alive and happy, especially if there's someone we've got a crush on. :)

[Buddhistboy73]

This is a short, yet heartfelt poem about nature and new beginnings...:)
I love the way you mix up nature and emotions....

sun soaked dandelions...
holding me softly by my hair

And then the final line........asking for that kiss....

Thanks for sharing this poem...:)

BB73

[lov]

thank you so much

[Buddhistboy73]

You're welcome...:)

Feel free to check out one of my poems when you have some free time

And good luck with your writing journey....:)

BB73