Yin and Yang

If I am the fire

Who is the rain?

Is there someone out there

Who can contain my rage?

 

I if am the dark

Who is the light?

Could someone find me

In my self-imposed night?

 

If I am restless

Where is my peace?

Is there somewhere in the middle

Where we could meet?

 

If I am Yin

Where is my Yang?

What must I do

To know his name?

Reviews

[Brittany DeFranco]

I love it, and very good for your age ^_^

[*Kantola*]

Very nice! I loved the theme of opposites! Well done!

[A.C. Davis]

I really like this poem' it's awesome! 100/100 Thanks for recommending her Sofie!

[Odayin]

Excellent

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I if am the dark
Who is the light?
I've asked myself that question years ago
100/100

[Southern Cross]

Love the balance here much like the symbolic Yin and Yang..I think life itself will send you this offering in time.. Beautifully written

[Pencrafter]

Your poem seems to express the yearning for companionship, the quest for a satisfying partner. It's well-written and expressive.

[Destinyxi]

Haha this is damn awesome, and you're 13? Dang. I was NOT writing stuff like this at 13.. at least I don't think so.. hm.. I gotta go back to look through my stuff xD

Either way, great poem!!

[Drifter]

I really like this, it shows that there needs to be opposition to maintain balance in life, but life often feels like there is no balance at all. I also really liked the point of view you put it in, I am the fire, I am the dark, I am the restless. Good job.

[Krista Weiss]

Aww really cute :)