Destruction

The darkness floods the earth

Storms rage

The earth quakes

Fire burns homes and leaves scars

Tornadoes, in their madness, destruct

Floods and tsunamis

Even water hurts

 

But the sun will shine

Light peaks through the clouds

The darkness will scatter

And for the moment

Everything is all right

Reviews

[Abbie]

this is an okay poem. I don't love it, but it is alright. And as Sophie said, It does sound like you wrote it fast and it does sound similar to Storm. Keep writing :)

[Sophie]

I like it, but its not my favorite of yours. :/ It kinda sounds like you wrote it in a minute, also it's very similar to Storm. That's all :)