Pollution

This is a re-post of the same version. A review by Leah inspired me to re-write it. BUT I haven't yet!!! Watch for Pollution version 2 coming soon.

STANDING AT THE LEDGE, I PEER DOWN AT THE PEOPLE - DANCING - DARING - DOUBTING - DOPING - MY LIFE THE ONE CHANCE WOULD LOVE TO PREDICT - THE FAMOUS WALK MEMORIES CALLING - TEARS SHED OVER WORDS FALLING - STANDING ON THE LEDGE I PEER DOWN AT THE WORLD - LYING - CHEATING - STEALING - GREIVING - THEIR LIVES UNTAMED CHANCE HAS PREDICTED - MY LIFE UNTAINTED BY MANKINDS WICKED SNEAR - BECAUSE I SO CHOOSE NOT TO HEAR - THE INCESTIOUS POLLUTION WE ALL SEEM TO FEAR - Gossip

Reviews

[Julia]

Great poem and FYI...I wrote this. This is me...I just have a new page now. Julia

[Lady leah]

Very nice for this earth is all we have today. we should all do our part now.

[Wildecat]

Wonderful poem, and I too disdain gossip, there are more important things to concern ourselves with like taking better care of Mother Earth. Nice write.