my hurt my pain

a lil love poem

the one u feel beautiful with
the one who u can be urself with
the one u can talk to
confide in
i lost him

now im lost
and confused
doing things
i shouldnt
do

its his fault i say
its his love that made me feel this way
the day he told me it would be forever
and he would be there to stay

Author's Note

ignore all grammer

Reviews

[C. C. Burl]

Thank you very much for that poem. It's not exactly what I'm going through but for some reason I needed that . . . it's a very lovely poem, nice and short. Again, thanks.
Keep writing as much as you can; tell everything, everything, everything you ever thought. Get it out. That's my advice.

[ape domenigoni]

I have been there many times...beautiful