"Life is ... Life"

life's true essence.....

Life's so ironic.

We used to love persons who don't love us

and ignore those who care for us.

 

Life's full of foolish decisions.

We used to love someone

even if we know that it'll always end up in pain.

 

Life's so difficult,

Knowing that it is a total struggle.

It'll never be too easy.

 

Life is fun.

Even though there are problems,

still there are lots of reasons to smile.

 

Life is everything.

It is the best gift for us to receive,

and the best challenge for us to overcome.

 

Life is life.

Don't expect too much or less from it.

We were only given two choices to make.

Take it or live it.

 

Live Life as it is suppose to be.

'Cause life is never perfect.

And because life has no Pause,

no reverse, and no fast forward,

let's just play it right.

                                    

[A/N: type your comments down there ..... thanks!!]

Author's Note

comments???

Reviews

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

this is great and so true. I love this and just a thought it might be perfect if a song was in here or a link to the song or whatever. but I really loved this 100/100

[bryandc15]

Thank you:)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

anytime

[AWickedMoon]

I have to say am absolutly in love with the last peice!
"Live Life as it is suppose to be.

'Cause life is never perfect.

And because life has no Pause,

no reverse, and no fast forward,

let's just play it right."

So wise. Thankyou! :)

[bryandc15]

Sharing this piece is a great pleasure for me... Thank you for this review:)

[Andie]

Really good and well written!
:D

[bryandc15]

thank you XxamandaxX

[Andie]

Your welcome! :)

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I like it, I like it alot,
very well written.

[bryandc15]

Thank you:)

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N/P : )

[Blackened Soul]

i like the way you describe life here. take it or live it, that's about as simple as it gets. and time never stops moving. the positive outlook is pretty nice too. overall good writing

[gombeggar]

sounds like u r making some headway in the understanding of life and it's ups and downs...that is always a good thing...and u r making headway in yer writing as well here

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Ahhh.......thank's fella to send me a msg to read this ur preety one.....i really liked + loved it totally......i love ur;s preety cool wor'ds too here,the few lines that i loved here are :-)
"Life is full of ffoooolissshhhhh decision's......."
"Don't expect too much or les from it.........."
"life has no reverse & no farward's........"
"we ignore those who care for us.........."
& so many lines fella.......i can't write into my word's...........i loved it..........
when i was reading this one i was totally lost in ur poetry world'.........i loved it fella............have a nice day/.........carry-on...........94.5/100......:-))

[bryandc15]

thanks for the review ... I appreciate it so much:)

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don't mention it....u' deserve this.......
anyway...here u've done great job.....carry-on with your work...have a cheerful day...

[bryandc15]

I would like to ask something..... What is Life for you? Disregarding How I defined Life from, this piece .... I still like to know your ideas... thanks!!!

[Wolfwind]

Overall I like what it brings across. I shall agree the life is life and we must dance to it's music the best we can as it's always the best symphony that the world can offer. =)
There are some tense issues that could be revised to make it flow a bit smoother, but for the most part is well crafted.

Aaron

[bryandc15]

thank you for the review and for your response to my message!! thanks a lot ......

[Wolfwind]

You're very welcome. =)

[natzky]

hmmm...i so love this poem...heheh...
the actuality of this poem reminds me of the book "purpose_driven_life"

"life is a test, life is trust and life is a temporary assignment."